In my last article, "How To Write A Headline - Part 2", I explained the "Who, What, Why" formula of writing a headline. In this article, I show you how I used this formula to come up with a headline for a weight loss newsletter.
As I explained in my previous article, the first thing I do when writing a headline is identify the customer. This is the "who" part of the "Who, What, Why" formula. In the case of a weight-loss newsletter, the "who" part could be: People who want to lose weight.
Now I’d advise breaking "people who want to lose weight" down even further into specific groups, like "stay-at-home moms who want to lose weight", "busy executives who want to lose weight", etc., and craft your headline accordingly. The more precisely your headline is targeted to your audience, the more likely it is to grab their attention. Read the rest of this entry »